Today I’m going to tell you a little story of why and how I changed my book cover – a time consuming and expensive endeavour, but one I feel was worthwhile fo’ shizzle!
When I first started off brainstorming for my book cover, I searched through hundreds of book covers that I thought looked really pretty and I liked the color and art of. (Basically I went about the process ALL WRONG) Here are some examples of the covers I chose, and went on to show my book cover designer for inspiration;
I told my book cover designer how I liked the colors, the art, the playfulness of the books, and gave them a picture of me on my wedding day (since I wanted to use a bridal image but did not have the budget to pay for a model at this point) to turn into a vector art image. I also instructed them that I would like to use the color scheme white and orange.
After several revisions, here is the design that we came up with:
For a few months I was pretty happy with the design. I thought it was fun, clean, professional looking and hey, it’s got me on the cover (actually my least favorite thing about it).
Then I read a great post by Susan Kendrick on the fabulous site Wow-WomenOnWriting.com about book design and asked myself whether the book measured up to the advice in her checklist:
- Your title or your subtitle contains a keyword or keywords related to your topic
- The title is easy to say, hear, remember, and talk about
- Your book title is clear and concise, i.e. no one who hears about it or sees it, regardless of their background, will go, “Huh?”
- The title stands out from other books on this topic because of some unique feature or benefit
- It is not already taken -book titles can’t be copyrighted, but you don’t want your book confused with another one out there
- Experts in the area of book covers and book marketing give you a thumbs up
- It will give you the flexibility to create a series of related books, products, and services
- Your book title captures the attention of your target audience, which you can determine either by a focus group or online tools like Google AdWords
- Your book title creates a defining brand that will grow your reputation and your overall business.
At this point I was already considering changing certain elements of the book (based on the advice above), but then I stumbled upon Joel Friedlander’s blog and after absorbing all of his amazing advice (note to self, this research should have been done before talking to a book designer), I realised that there was a whole lot more wrong with the cover. Here were two major problems:
Problem 1: “Use the background—Avoid white backgrounds, which will disappear on retailer’s white screens. Use a color, a texture, or a background illustration instead.”
Hmmm, after a few painful hours looking on Amazon and Barnes and Noble online, I realized that Joel was absolutely right. Books with white covers just blend into the background. Slightly problematic since these are my two primary retailers, and I need to do something to grab potential readers attention.
Problem 2: “Make your title large —Reduce your cover design on screen to the size of a thumbnail on Amazon and see if you can read it. Can you make out what it’s about? If not, simplify.”
Here is the thumbnail image of my book: (how it will appear on Amazon’s search results)
Oh dear. Now I have corrected vision and I still can’t properly read the title.
With all of this new advice I had procured from the book cover design experts (thank you!!!), here is the criteria I gave my book cover designer the second time around; (note how different it was from the first time. ‘Pretty’ is no longer my priority).
- The color must stand out against an online (esp. Amazon) background
- When it is reduced to thumbnail it should still grab attention
- Text should be big enough that I can read it on a thumbnail
- Font should be easy to read at various sizes







While the online criteria are all good points, you should not have to abandon your personal preferences for them (unless they truly conflict.) I think your original color scheme could still work and you could maintain a pretty and elegant design while optimizing it for online retailers. Thanks for the post! Great heads up for self publishing authors.
Thanks for your comment! So you see no problems with having a white background? I have seen some nice examples of them, but feel like they get lost on the screen.
I guess I would have flipped it. The idea is to not have a white edge to white background. You could still have a white-ish background, like a bridal veil or something with texture. Anyway… there are other ways to get what the author wants and the online buyer needs to see it. Check our site out for some cover samples… http://www.authorsupport.com
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I’d have gone for something far more obvious – white lace, a gold ring, a glass of champagne, a wedding invitation, a photo of a happy young couple, all beautifully shot with simple elegant lettering over it. Because I think the idea for the book is a great one, and neither cover gets it across. The bride on the second cover is tiny!
I also like the original cover better — the image and the color scheme. Jerry Dorris’ idea of a textured background seems worth trying. You could also try an almost-white background with a touch of the orange.
Thanks for your idea, Karen! I’m working on some changes and everyone’s feedback is helping.
Hi, Laura. I hope the book is selling well with the new cover. I have to say that I much prefer the original cover, although it is hard to read the cover copy. My book cover designer came up with a lovely cover originally and I had her make lots of changes so it would meet the new e-marketing standards. Sometimes I wish we didn’t have to take these things into consideration, but I’ve finally given up on my vision of people lingering in a bookstore and lovingly caressing my book’s cover!
When I look at your book on amazon, the “customers who bought this” suggests a book with a white cover and there’s a thin borderline around it so it doesn’t melt into the background. Just something to keep in mind for your next book.
I would be interested to know if sales improved with the new cover.
Great advice re: the thin borderline, thanks! The new rules of e-marketing are both fascinating and frustrating. The learning curve is wonderful though. Hope your book is selling well! It sounds like a great premise
Excellent advice and lessons learned, Laura. Thank you for sharing this info and giving us great visuals.
No problem Bea! Thanks for dropping by
IMO your book title and subtitle are great! But… I think you need to start over from scratch on the cover. The first one is ok, the second one is horrible. Go to a microstock site, search on ‘beautiful happy bride’, and buy the photo you like best. The standard license at most microstock sites allows you to use the image on a book cover and the cost is usually less than $20.
http://www.dreamstime.com/royalty-free-stock-photos-wedding-kiss-image1315528
http://www.fotolia.com/id/11588836
http://www.shutterstock.com/pic.mhtml?id=46301266
Then anyone who has Photoshop, some composition sense, and can find fonts.com should able to build a killer cover around your photo.
Best of luck with your book, it looks like a winner!
Thanks for your advice Michael, and please accept my apologies for the late response. I’m currently experimenting with the cover and will let you know how I get on. It’s all a fantastic experience!
That’s really interesting. My first self-published book also has a cover with a white background. I kind of like how it works against the white of the Amazon screen and in fact I’m thinking of using that feature in my next cover as a way of making it really stand out. We’ll see if I can get it to work for me!
Hi Ros. The Clutter Book suggested using a thin line as a border to make the cover stand out online, perhaps that would solve that problem? Thanks for your comment and best of luck!
Yes, I’m thinking I might do that. But I also like the idea of having something ‘outside the box’.
I liked the model (you) on the first design.
As a reader, it made me feel like it was a ‘personal’ book whereas the second title seemed for the mass market. Okay, I know I just confused you and a whole heaps of your readers, but I think I want most of the second cover, with that beautiful photo of you or another appropriate human on the cover.
Thanks Rebecca! After all the comments I got on this post and elsewhere, I switched back to the first cover to see how things go. =)
Yes. I know I respond to emotion. I need something human that I can relate to. And that looks like a ‘feel good’ cover. Very appealing
I’m sorry I’m not getting married any time soon. Otherwise I’d consider it. I promise it’s nothing personal!